Thanks, Jennifer, for inviting us into your forums and for starting this thread!
I would love to discuss everyone’s edits, as a way to learn the different aspects of a manuscript we can focus on in this stage of editing.
I chose to edit The Achilles Project for the class. My revision letter encompassed three main issues: worldbuilding/genre convention, POV characters, and info-dumping and while I spent as much time as I was able to on this edit, I only managed to edit the first act of three.
What were some of your DE experiences with the mss in this class?