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Jennifer Lawler
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Yes, for me the main problem was “show v tell.” We’re told in the exposition: “Literally was one of Lexie’s favorite words.” Well, why not just show her using it?

“True to form, Trip noticed nothing wrong.” > again, why not show this?

And “There were many rules” followed by seven pages of HOA rules. I paged ahead a lot.