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Jake Nicholls
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I think the trouble I had with the first half was that it seemed quite meandering, and the characters didn’t really know what they were doing on the ‘quest’ or why—so it didn’t seem like there was any drive or forward momentum. And then at some point, everything just fell into place: all the previous worldbuilding and character information suddenly came together, and things got a lot more engaging.