In terms of plot progression, it felt very static at the beginning, and some of the stories that Tracker tells seemed quite circular. But at the same time, the ‘storytelling’ narration style allowed for the jumping back and forth through the chronology and so I felt like hints were used to create some suspense for the reader (e.g. about what happened to Tracker’s eye). In some cases, the suspense may have been held out too long to keep the reader’s interest, though. What did you think?