Forums Club Ed Book Club Black Leopard, Red Wolf discussion Reply To: Black Leopard, Red Wolf discussion

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Kendra Olson
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I went a little back and forth on the dialogue as well. Sometimes it was entertaining, other times it felt like an unnecessary diversion.

The language itself seemed intended to shock readers, but this felt overdone to me. Surely the events themselves are shocking enough? I think this relates back to the problems I had with the tone.